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Twota
09-02-2011, 10:02 PM
Crows gather around a hole
sheltering a stiff body,
they all tilt their beaks
in search for peace in death
or a piece of the carrion,
eventually, they all fly away,
each glad with what he finds.

tailor STATELY
09-02-2011, 10:32 PM
Love this poem Twota.

One thought - some may find their inheritance wanting in this materialistic world.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

yuka
09-03-2011, 06:34 AM
Nice title and theme, if only display more for here. Still great though.

Bar22do
09-03-2011, 07:22 AM
Rather terrible and pitiless, Twota, though well written, as often your stuff is.

Twota
09-04-2011, 07:20 AM
Thanks tailor, yuka and bar, glad you like it ;D

beautiful_heart
09-05-2011, 11:19 AM
Its short and nice poem. I like it. :)

Twota
09-06-2011, 09:27 AM
Thanks beautiful :D glad you like it. :)