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maleonpyg
08-31-2011, 09:35 AM
Fairest wild flowers
bloom vibrantly in manure
but not in a vase

yuka
09-01-2011, 02:24 AM
Well , short but profound.

Bar22do
09-01-2011, 02:28 AM
very true...

blank|verse
09-01-2011, 03:41 PM
Yes, another nicely observed little haiku. You might like to think about making lines 1 and 3 rhyme just to give your haiku that little extra something...

osho
09-02-2011, 04:48 AM
Marvelous!

You spoke of the heart of it
Trimmed with voluble nonsense

That is how beauty goes bordered
Beauty per se wants to propel infinitely
Society pruning it into a size handy for it