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maleonpyg
08-31-2011, 09:35 AM
Fairest wild flowers
bloom vibrantly in manure
but not in a vase
Well , short but profound.
Bar22do
09-01-2011, 02:28 AM
very true...
blank|verse
09-01-2011, 03:41 PM
Yes, another nicely observed little haiku. You might like to think about making lines 1 and 3 rhyme just to give your haiku that little extra something...
Marvelous!
You spoke of the heart of it
Trimmed with voluble nonsense
That is how beauty goes bordered
Beauty per se wants to propel infinitely
Society pruning it into a size handy for it
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