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Revolte
08-29-2011, 04:40 AM
Fingers dig through my brain
searching through ear's photographs
looking for those sharpened words.
Trying to let them free and loose
but only finding shadows
blanketing the demons underneath.

Yet planting their seeds into memories
letting me never forget the pain
-raging currents of worthlessness-
they drive me into sadness,
pulling me with their tides
and kill me with reflective waters.

Grabbing branches of others
I pull myself to their skin,
keeping afloat with affection.
But the tides flow stronger
and grab me by the heart
to be dragged back to sorrow.

Delta40
08-29-2011, 05:15 AM
very nice dark poem Revolte and good title.

Revolte
08-29-2011, 05:30 AM
very nice dark poem Revolte and good title.

thank you! :willy_nilly:

Buh4Bee
09-01-2011, 10:22 PM
Ugh, this is so sad. I think you did a nice job crafting your poem.