Memo To a Maiden Moving Out

[Jassy Melson]

Physically, I grasp
for the fleeting fringes
of your changing nature.
Mentally, I believe
we all need havens of solitude.
Spiritually, I know
you'll never go away.

[Hawkman]

Nice one Jassy, but fix the typo, "your"? :)

[Jassy Melson]

Thank you, Hawkman, for the suggestion. I changed your to you'll . Pretty bad mistake on my part.

[Haunted]

Great one. Especially love "fleeting fringes / of your changing nature". So ethereal and beautiful.

[Jassy Melson]

Thank you very much.