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Dark Muse
08-26-2011, 01:51 PM
Lost in Your Words

Your words
have the power
to melt me.

Dissolving
into you slowly
with your every
breath.

Your lips
devour every
spare inch
of my flesh.

In your presence
warmth radiates
a supernova
inside of me.

All it takes
is a single word
sweet upon your lips
to abandon me
to ecstasy.

Delta40
08-26-2011, 06:14 PM
Wow. Makes me miss the passion of my youth....

tailor STATELY
08-27-2011, 05:44 AM
Yes, a very passionate poem.

I found this stanza the most outstanding:
All it takes
is a single word
sweet upon your lips
to abandon me
to ecstasy.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

MystyrMystyry
08-27-2011, 06:53 AM
Very good, with smooth easy flow and muchly powerful

hallaig
08-27-2011, 07:40 AM
I seem to send women to sleep when I speak. Very romantic. Keep this byronic soulmate!

Dark Muse
08-27-2011, 12:39 PM
Thank you!

mutedresponse
08-27-2011, 01:29 PM
So beautiful and elegant!