response to story

[Steven Hunley]

I liked this too. The interaction between two different people, and a thoughtful conclusion, all in dialogue. Seem to me you got a lot from very few words.

[Buh4Bee]

Hey Steven- Where you responding to Jilty? You started a new thread.

[Delta40]

lol. amazing story Steve! Very few words indeed but honest in its depiction....

[Buh4Bee]

I like the dialogue.

[Steven Hunley]

How on earth did that happen. I think I got up from the computer and was writing a response to Jilty and viola! OMG OMG! How totally embarrassing!

I'll e-mail and see if it can be erased!!!!

[MystyrMystyry]

Erased!? I want to read the sequel!

[Steven Hunley]

Yeah, that's it. it isn't a f***-up. No, it realistic minimalism in literature. Real minimal.

You guys are TOO MUCH!

[Delta40]

You're a true artist. My imagination is left wide open to the endless possibilities...