Marbles (Take II)

[everyadventure]

I wlll keep this memory
encased in glass
so I may hold it,
bright as a cat's eye marble
that marries light.

[Hawkman]

What an exquisite thought...

best, H

[PrinceMyshkin]

That concept of marrying light is exquisite and the economy of this poem enhances the thought.

[Bar22do]

overwhelmingly beautiful!

[ShadowsCool]

Nice. I saw the marble in my eye.
Where's take I

[Delta40]

Very economic EA but packed to the rafters.

[tailor STATELY]

Delightful poem. Helps prove that less is often more.

However. Begs the question: what if you lose your marbles?

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Twota]

I love it. :D

Miaaaow!

[MystyrMystyry]

I read Take I and am torn between both - I do like the idea of extreme pruning to arrive at the essential essence though (and in this case partcularly you've certainly got it right)