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maleonpyg
08-23-2011, 11:33 PM
Sweep away gravel

When there's too much worthless sand

Sterling gold won't shine

Jack of Hearts
08-24-2011, 05:22 AM
Hey, like this one too. You're doing good work in that awful form.







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hillwalker
08-24-2011, 05:30 AM
Clever title, and as haikus go it's cryptic and concise.
Not so sure about the word 'sterling' in this context though.

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