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submg
08-23-2011, 12:38 AM
HELL

Fire flashes in blackness
enter oblivious happiness
sees flickering faces and relaxes
smoke blows to the empty spaces of only god knows
music seduces long flows of thought brought back to cold road
car drifts and souls lift
who thought we'd die high just to find Satan's gift.