Wuthering Heights Essay Corrections

[irinmisfit92]

Hey everyone :) I'm having difficulty writing literature essays - my teacher says I don't develop the ideas well and they're all over the place. The problem is she only gives a rough idea and she does not exactly teach you how to develop your ideas. She expects us to do everything by ourselves and I really need help. If anyone is willing to at least look at my essay and tell me what I can improve on and actually give corrections, I'd gladly appreciate it. :D

Oh btw I'm using Richard III and Wuthering Heights for my A level literature texts. :sleep: Gawd I'm tired.

[DickZ]

Why don't you post your essay here? There are lots of forum members who provide great suggestions, but you have to be willing to show what you've done on your own. Only then could a reviewer see if making suggestions would even be worthwhile.

Your teacher makes a valid point in expecting you to do things on your own. Let us see what you've done on your own. There are too many students who come into this forum and seem to expect a thundering herd to come to their rescue, when they haven't even taken the first step.

[Intuition]

As the poster above mentioned-- feedback can only be given after viewing the text. It seems as if your instructor most likely dislikes either your structure or clarity.