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Jerrybaldy
08-14-2011, 04:50 PM
Abandoned and ready,
spread eagled on creased linen,
erotically fated.
An orchestra are playing
some other bugger’s favourite tune.
The door opens to give a breeze
that’s asks the candles to dance
a vanilla waltz with a lilac stench.
I laugh at your appearance,
I have a moments doubt.
But I am ready,
look on ye mighty and despair,
unhood now
and rip my f ucking heart out.

everyadventure
08-14-2011, 05:26 PM
One of those "what the hell, why not?" moments. Glad to see you posting again :)

Delta40
08-14-2011, 06:31 PM
I don't how you do it. The grass roots c'mon I'll 'ave yer with classical music and candles flickering in the wind....Jerryesque as ever.

Jerrybaldy
08-15-2011, 05:27 PM
penultimate line if not L8

Jerrybaldy
08-15-2011, 05:30 PM
We are after all, all tossers, thrilled by a world wide comment in double figures :D sorry n all but dumbo was sat in the room flapping his ears at me ;)