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ShadowFire
08-14-2011, 03:46 PM
Lost Like This

Must it be like this?
Nights spent, wasted, gone
The call to the Sorrowful Lake
Each rose in another's hand

What's to come of me?
A trapped beast thirsty
Drooling midnight of poison blood
Needing a gentle petal to touch

Am I not worthy of grace?
The embrace of a love
Uncontrollable desire to give
Yet lost is my rose

Delta40
08-14-2011, 06:36 PM
A pondering, dark poem.

Buh4Bee
08-14-2011, 06:53 PM
Looks like the roses are busy, maybe the beast needs to find a tulip.

ShadowFire
08-14-2011, 06:56 PM
Delta40 - Thank you

jersea - I don't want to settle for a tulip, but thank you for your comment.

Buh4Bee
08-14-2011, 07:01 PM
Maybe I should have suggested a peony; I think the roses are rather prickly. But, I don't mean any disrespect over the sincerity of your piece.

ShadowFire
08-14-2011, 07:06 PM
No disrespect taken. Every flower has its flaw, but I would take the pain from the thorns just to hold my dear rose.