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Dark Muse
08-14-2011, 01:30 AM
Ghost Dance

A subtle deception
of movement
plays with my mind
alluding to ghost visions
dancing conspicuously
before the window panes,
but in a glance
I know it is only
the wind gently teasing
quivering leaves
that sway in silent
obedience
leaving me to
gasp in wonder
at every display.

Bar22do
08-14-2011, 04:34 AM
Your usual precision in the mystery of a detail, of a moment; wonderful observation.

ucello
08-14-2011, 08:08 AM
Wonder as a response to mystery. How beautiful.

Twota
08-14-2011, 08:53 AM
I love it. ;o

Dark Muse
08-14-2011, 12:03 PM
Thank you!

ShadowFire
08-14-2011, 03:40 PM
Beautiful as always. My favorite part is the "in silent obedience".

Buh4Bee
08-14-2011, 06:43 PM
All I have to say is what I always say. What a talent.