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ShadowsCool
08-13-2011, 10:33 PM
The proud have fallen
As streamers from the sky,
The corrupt and perverse
Also pass us by,
What kind of darkness
Has beset us?

The Angels in tow
Follow the streamers on by,
Up the cracked cliffs
The dark Angels blairingly screech,
Above them only heaven knows
I see an awful red colored sky.

Imagine what the unrepented see
Awoken nastily from their dreams,
To face a nightmare like no other;
There they cry and see
The bottom pit of a dragons soul
There mauling sinful flesh,
With violent earthquakes
Opening everywhere all graves,
The wicked crawl out as bones to see
A shattered day.

Their restful sleep had come to end
The wrath and pain had come to roost
Throwing them sad souls down the boiling lake
Ever laced with sulfer and fire.

hillwalker
08-14-2011, 05:55 AM
This is a messy, melodramatic rendering of the fire and brimstone warnings religious freaks tend to preach with regular monotony.

If you believe in this nonsense, then that's your prerogative, but I'm not sure posting a poem like this is going to get you much positive feedback since your moral high ground is no higher than anyone else's.

It's rather like some ancient prophet from the Old Testament has returned to chastise us. My guess is that the 'unrepented' (unrepentant?) awake from their dreams to see the same visions as you - none of us can class ourselves free of sin as we are all human.

Not a particularly enlightening poem.

h