Connections

[Red-Headed]

Changing connection
remote railway platform -
people not talking.

[Jack of Hearts]

Well, Red, this reader read it, out of respect for your endeavors.

There's the subtle undertone of alienation, and the many interpretations one can make of 'changing connections.'

The middle line seems too unrefined to its weight and the overall flavor is anemic.

So not this reader's favorite piece of yours (that distinction belongs to that one time you 'let loose').








J

[Red-Headed]

De gustibus non est disputandum.