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zoolane
08-12-2011, 04:40 PM
Swimming With The Devil.

In the second that stay in the darkest time in my life.
The swimming of the devil himself in me.
I am walking with evil my hand with blunt tool to keep swing at lover’s skull.
The lover drop to floor with small hole.
Pouring with red wine down his back.
Screaming with terror as I stand over him while laughing.
As die before my eyes.
The tool over my shoulder and on to next victim.
Delta40
08-12-2011, 06:44 PM
Chilling stuff. And as always the message breathes in the way it ought admidst your authentic writing style. I'm worried that you'll do this!
zoolane
08-13-2011, 07:13 AM
Chilling stuff. And as always the message breathes in the way it ought admidst your authentic writing style. I'm worried that you'll do this!

As I have said before, I am pretty sure I was serial killer in a past life.
hillwalker
08-13-2011, 12:19 PM
Jack (or Jacqueline?) the Ripper springs to mind.

H :-)
zoolane
08-13-2011, 04:17 PM
Jack (or Jacqueline?) the Ripper springs to mind.

H :-)

Hmm, Jodie or Joan?
Delta40
08-13-2011, 06:36 PM
As I have said before, I am pretty sure I was serial killer in a past life.

Jackie the Ripper disembowelling men? Unheard of!
kittypaws
08-13-2011, 07:33 PM
past lives can be haunting and if you sense you were a serial killer...I just wonder how that makes you feel now.

Your poem is quite frightening....


Screaming with terror as I stand over him while laughing.

kittypaws