Kinaesthetics of the Past (Proust, you can't have your cake & eat it.)

[Red-Headed]

Walking in the past
in coronation gardens
aoristic strolls -

excursions in space
are more prevalent to us -
more comfortable.

Recollections of
locomotions in term though
are less relevant:

Kinaesthetics of
‘lang syne’ a Proustian cake
of memory lane -

an evanescence
of impermanence in mind -
transient life-tides.

Voyages in time
an odyssey of living -
was it better then?

[Jack of Hearts]

Not sure what you were going for here, but invoking À la recherche du temps perdu seems like a rather academic thing to do. And that fit well with the formidable (not in the French way) word choice.








J

[Red-Headed]

Yeah, well ... you win some, you lose some.