The Peering.

[zoolane]

The Peering.

Peering out throught the mask which covers me.
In hiding I will stay.
Storing the deep of the unruling being.

The mask slip with smooth fell.
In rage at the of brutal act.
I will engage the anger which swell inside.

[Delta40]

as powerful and forceful as ever Zoo. Some spelling and repeated words can be edited but I can read past them to appreciate the poem itself.

[zoolane]

Thank you Delta. I hate Laptops. Edited.

[MystyrMystyry]

Zoo's back in top form!

Sounds like you need a punching bag Zoo :)

[Delta40]

The Peering.

Peering out throught the mask which covers me.
In hiding I will stay.
Storing the deep of the unruling being.

The mask slip with smooth fell.
In rage at the of brutal act.
I will engage the anger which swell inside.

Allow me as a friend who admires your natural ability despite literary challenges

Peering out through the mask which covers me.
In hiding I will stay.
Storing the deep of the unruling being.

The mask slips with smooth fell.
In rage at the brutal act,
I will engage the anger which swells inside.

[zoolane]

Thank you hunnie for your help.

[Delta40]

Anytime and keep posting Zoo. I love the force behind your work!

[hillwalker]

Good to see your name back on here - and your unique style never fails to stir up strong emotions in the reader.

H

[Jack of Hearts]

Really felt the heat in the last three lines. Welcome back zoo.







J

[zoolane]

Thank you all.

[Jerrybaldy]

I agree with Hill. Good to see you back on the poems zoo x