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ShadowsCool
08-07-2011, 02:27 AM
To Know The Lord++

To know the Lord,
Such is His greatness,
Depth and majesty.

I astonish in His
Countless Wisdom,
His cradling Arms

That lay outstretched;
Piercing the clouds
With His beam

Of light,
Where I am lit up
With pure Love.

tailor STATELY
08-07-2011, 02:58 AM
Enjoyed.

Thank you for sharing.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

yuka
08-07-2011, 05:01 AM
Everlasting fondest Shadows.:)

everyadventure
08-07-2011, 10:25 AM
Such peace in this.

PrinceMyshkin
08-07-2011, 12:12 PM
This is an expression of your faith but it lacks, for me, the music, the cadence or the imagery that I hope for in a poem.

Jack of Hearts
08-07-2011, 01:44 PM
A fine religious offering but not a very good poem in this reader's opinion (to be fair, probably more a fault of the... genre... than the skill in language this time- but neither is helping the other).








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