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ShadowsCool
08-01-2011, 10:50 PM
~~Beloved~~

Sleep in my arms beloved
Breath your self into me
Let's lose us in a sanguine dream
I will find you on the other side
You with me will go for a ride
We will find what's there
You and me.

Our dreams will fire in the emotional blaze
We shall be under a canopy
Breath to breath
With twinkles on our faces
Dreaming into each others reflections
Two souls divested by what we found
Things that used to scare us
True love.

We will build there
Our dreams will repose in each others will
We will look out there
We will be
Eye to eye
Dual souls content we found
Each the other
You in me, me and you.

Jack of Hearts
08-02-2011, 01:24 AM
This reader always had a hard time with abstract readings like this when he was in school.
Sensory language (words that a person can imagine tasting, seeing, smelling, hearing, or touching) was always more kind to him. Do you think this is strange or is it like that for you, as well?






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Twota
08-02-2011, 08:59 AM
I agree with Jack about the sensory language, but I also like this poem. :D
In the second line, I guess you meant ''Breathe''.