Butterfly

[Red-Headed]

Flutter 'cabbage white' -
whilst sunlight refracts in pond
bending golden fish.

[MystyrMystyry]

Pretty good

I tried a pome once based on an observation - the white butterflies were flickering on and off between white fence posts - but just the image remains because, well, I didn't even know there was such a thing as haiku back then. Maybe I'll intertwine it into something one day...

I like the bendy goldfish in the pond

[Delta40]

Now I quite like this one Red. I remembered on the train yesterday that I wrote a 6000 word story about a Big Issue vendor who only spoke in haiku. I don't know why I forgot that. Thanks for awakening my appreciation of it.

[Jack of Hearts]

Definitely liked the use of color (the imagery, not the font) in this one.






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