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Red-Headed
07-31-2011, 07:44 PM
Broken dragonfly -
a sad rainbow of colour
on a wet footpath.

Jack of Hearts
07-31-2011, 07:46 PM
This reader doesn't often chase sad rainbows but he genuinely liked your first and third lines.





J

Twota
07-31-2011, 07:50 PM
I like it, I hate dragonflies tho. :D

everyadventure
07-31-2011, 07:51 PM
Gasp! A haiku I liked! Good job :)

Red-Headed
08-01-2011, 06:39 AM
This reader doesn't often chase sad rainbows but he genuinely liked your first and third lines.





J

Thanks (I'll have to work on that middle one).

Red-Headed
08-01-2011, 06:39 AM
Gasp! A haiku I liked! Good job :)

Thanks.

Red-Headed
08-01-2011, 06:41 AM
I like it, I hate dragonflies tho. :D

Thanks, yeah they can look a bit scary. They are often called 'horse-stingers' in English slang. I don't know why though, I'm pretty certain they don't have a sting!