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Delta40
07-30-2011, 03:06 AM
What squallid love is this
that rattles like a shopping cart
with a wonky wheel?
A willy wagtail throttled by smoking power lines
stirs my need to be manhandled with electric force.
I moan in tune with nature's unrest
as She beats against the windows, urging us onward.
You lurk hungrily at the end of the bed,
and I feel my body come to inviting attention.
We hum slogans from our favourite ads
till you spring like a jungle predator,
enslaving me in your grip.
Our lips meet to celebrate
the lowest shopping bill this month
and I smoulder at the storminess of our lust.
Then, like some God, you command sunlight,
beckoning it to stream through timber slats.
Calm the external fury and
shine the golden light on me will you?
While you harden at your dynamic prowess,
I watch disgruntled as the cloud cover dissipates,
knowing you have doused my lecherous yearning.
Now we must wait for the next rainy day.

MystyrMystyry
07-30-2011, 03:28 AM
Very well done Delts! This gets top marks in my book! :)

Hawkman
07-30-2011, 03:39 AM
"Our lips meet to celebrate
the lowest shopping bill this month"

Loved this - lol. A real anti-love, love poem.

Live long and prosper - H

Twota
07-30-2011, 07:39 AM
I really like it. :)

deryk
07-30-2011, 08:15 AM
The mixture of dynamism and electrified banality really gives this poem a window of life. Lay back and groove on a rainy day.

Delta40
07-30-2011, 08:23 AM
Thanks all. Good to see you back online Deryk.

everyadventure
07-30-2011, 11:59 AM
HA! I love how he only gets action on rainy days. Women are such fickle creatures :)

Delta40
07-30-2011, 06:37 PM
HA! I love how he only gets action on rainy days. Women are such fickle creatures :)

I was in a playful mood yesterday. Went from decomposing men to sex on a rainy day and I figure the title of my next poem should be Lick My Cliche!