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Twota
07-29-2011, 08:12 PM
I am all alone eating
in a central park,
she approaches me
with slow careful steps
and looks at my steaks
with bright innocent eyes,
I throw one of them to
fall near her small paws,
she quickly attacks the steak,
barely chews it and swallows.

Then looking at me again, her
hungry eyes ask for more to eat,
so I try to feed her myself
and I lower my hand with a steak,
she smells it, snatches it
and runs away to a safe distance,
I continue throwing her my steaks
and she keeps on eating them,
only she chews better before she
swallows them now.

she feels little secure and
allows me to fondle her head
as she eats the last steak,
now my plate is quite clean
by her very own tongue, may be
I am still hungry as she ate all,
tho I am glad to have a new friend,
but it's just folly and I am wrong,
for she gets rid of my patting hand
by curving her vertebral down,
looks at my shining empty plate
with different, stronger eyes now,
then turns around and walks away
looking for another fool.

Jack of Hearts
07-29-2011, 08:25 PM
This may be your finest yet.






J

everyadventure
07-29-2011, 08:33 PM
Yes, I agree with Jack. A strong ending.

Delta40
07-29-2011, 09:43 PM
The enchanting effect that a cat has on us is beautifully expressed here Twota. You're developing really well in your art.

Twota
07-30-2011, 07:22 AM
Jack, EA and Delta :D, Thanks alot :D glad you like it :)

and I love cats, MIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOW!

Twota
07-30-2011, 05:53 PM
oh well, I am not posting anything tonight cuz I am too lazy, I can resurrect this poem for more views. :D

Delta40
07-30-2011, 07:39 PM
Oh c'mon. Post another poem....!

Twota
07-30-2011, 08:06 PM
Oh oh, You're already addicted to my awesome poems, heh? :P

hahaa, just kidding :rolleyes:

I can't find anything to write about :/, I will think of a blank poem..may be. :Yawn:

Delta40
07-30-2011, 08:15 PM
write about that feeling of being blank....

Twota
07-30-2011, 08:18 PM
hmmm, this should be easy- I hope, It will be here soon. :D

Delta40
07-30-2011, 08:19 PM
My thoughts empty out
and trickle to the ground....

Twota
07-30-2011, 08:25 PM
aww, I like that..but it surely doesn't apply on you, again I envy your skillfulness..in a good way tho. :D

Delta40
07-30-2011, 08:27 PM
finish it and I'll envy you!

Twota
07-30-2011, 08:41 PM
bwahaha, I surely won't mind.:D

blank is little too blank tho, it will take a while. :D