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Mutatis-Mutandis
07-29-2011, 09:01 AM
The wheeling
and dealing
has left them reeling
as they run squealing,
while from above falls on them
the ceiling.
But they can't stop peeling
the skin before
it's done healing,
killing all feeling.

hillwalker
07-29-2011, 09:07 AM
Ugh - rhymed to death.

H

Delta40
07-29-2011, 09:12 AM
:iamwithstupid:

Mutatis-Mutandis
07-29-2011, 09:12 AM
It was an experiment in rhyme, really.

hillwalker
07-29-2011, 10:20 AM
It was an experiment in rhyme, really.

To torture your readers? :goof: Well, consider it a success.

H

yuka
07-29-2011, 10:23 AM
Is there any other /i:/ ling can be put here?:toetap05:

Mutatis-Mutandis
07-29-2011, 10:23 AM
I don't really get why you have to be so mean about it, hillwalker. And if 34 words can be tortuous, I wield a great power. :lol:

And it's all I could think of, yuka. If I would have thought of more, they would've gone in.