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Jack of Hearts
07-29-2011, 04:05 AM
Sweet to meet you dear Tigre
who tumbles 'tween fingerly wiggles.
A flush-purple plush, that's her Tigre
she tells under giggling curls.

This poet puts work into lines like
a bird who's song clarion rings-
but when baby tells you about Tigre,
her poetry's truer, it seems.

tailor STATELY
07-29-2011, 06:26 AM
Delightful poem. I enjoyed your restraint in wiggles and giggles.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

hillwalker
07-29-2011, 08:20 AM
Quite different from your usual stuff - I enjoyed it but couldn't even begin to explain why.

H

everyadventure
07-29-2011, 10:09 AM
Simply charming. I agree, sometimes the most beautiful poetry and most profound philosophical insights come from the mouths of babes...