Tonic

[Delta40]

I've gone all fizzy
like my self is a blur
shaky fingers can't find the spot
Thoughts through a blender
till they mean nothing
but carrots and onions
I want you near this mess
Hold me
Pretend I've got it together
Taste me
like the best mixed drink
Swallow me
so I never find my way
back here
Take me always
with a slice of lemon

[Varenne Rodin]

Sassy! I love Delta poems!

[Twota]

I love it lots, and I love carrots. :D

[ShadowsCool]

Interesting poems you write Delta with a twist of lemon too.

[MystyrMystyry]

Ebullience, reminiscent of essence - at first effervescence, and later lemonescence, ultimately evanescence. Very luminescent Deltaescence

[Delta40]

Ebullience, reminiscent of essence - at first effervescence, and later lemonescence, ultimately evanescence. Very luminescent Deltaescence

I dedicate this poem to you mystyrescence :seeya:

[Doralace]

Why is this poem sad for me? Do I interpret something wrong? but - that hand shaking and -

Thoughts through a blender
till they mean nothing
but carrots and onions
I want you near this mess

she/he wants him/her near this mess, not sure her/his wish is answered.

love this poem, Delta.

[Delta40]

Thanks everyone.

[everyadventure]

N is cracking and looking for comfort... or better yet, oblivion.

[Hawkman]

Never without gin and ice :D This one's really quite edgy, Delta There is a desparation to it which is both disturbing and wierdly compelling.

Live and be well - H

[Delta40]

Never without gin and ice :D This one's really quite edgy, Delta There is a desparation to it which is both disturbing and wierdly compelling.

Live and be well - H

Sometimes I'm full of it :ciappa: