Lowdown Cheatin' Woman Blues

[Jack of Hearts]

Baby doll, you know I can't tell right from wrong.
There's hard sunlight comin' in through the windows and
it's steamin', fillin' up my head with fog.
Maybe 'cause a piece of me is missin'
or maybe 'cause the peace there always was-
but your pieces come apart in little tear drops
makin' sorry at the bad end of my gun.

Don't flood up all my garden babe,
don't soak cry-stains through my sheets.
Don't flood up my garden babe
with what's rolling down your cheeks.

And the fella lyin' with ya,
lyin' lifeless in your arms- he's gone,
but I love you baby girl and
would I ever do ya harm?

[paperleaves]

Wow, this is absolutely AMAZING! Are you going to compose music to go along with this? If so, I'd LOVE to hear. Simply incredible!

in lovingkindness,
paper

[everyadventure]

Jack, you seem to be walking in someone else's boots. Perhaps you have a career as a country singer ahead of you.

[YesNo]

It sounds a bit excessive even for a redneck. However, it does nicely add to the stereotype.