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yuka
07-24-2011, 12:05 PM
Anxious Baby

Little dog, little dog
Do not **** on the grass

Little sparrow, little sparrow
Do not dirty the path

Let aunt cleaner
Go home earlier
Her baby must
Be anxious for mommy

Butterfly

Eat, eat, little sparrow
Finished, let’s play
Hide and seek

Sleep, sleep, little dog
You will dream
Of little angels

Fly, fly, butterfly
To the mountain there
Find your playmate

everyadventure
07-24-2011, 12:09 PM
There is a sweet sing-song quality to these, like nursery rhymes...

ShadowsCool
07-24-2011, 12:43 PM
yuka:

I can tell where he gets the talent from.
Nice airy poems. Thanks for sharing them with us.

Shadows

hillwalker
07-24-2011, 04:05 PM
Sweet and simple. He puts some of the efforts on here to shame.

H

yuka
07-25-2011, 02:48 AM
Thank you EA, Shaows, Hill, for your reading and comment, and my son also give his thanks to you :)

beautiful_heart
07-25-2011, 03:19 AM
Wow!!! Yuka your son has really got a talent to be a poet. He composes such a sweet, beautiful poems. I like them. :-)

qimissung
07-25-2011, 12:45 PM
These are sweet and adorable. I think he does take after his talented mommy!

yuka
07-27-2011, 11:56 PM
Thank you Beautiful, Qim, it's very kind of you to say that. :)