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TheodoreK.16
07-23-2011, 08:34 AM
This one's a bit shorter than my usuals.



Golden Sky

As the sun sets,
the golden sky shines across the horizon.
Warm rays stroke my face, like a loving hand,
ricochet,
and light the path to my future.

hillwalker
07-23-2011, 09:08 AM
They say it's often best to keep things short and this certainly proves how true it is.

Without doubt your best so far.

H

TheodoreK.16
07-23-2011, 09:48 AM
Thanks Hill!

Delta40
07-23-2011, 11:47 AM
I like its brevity too Theo.

yuka
07-23-2011, 01:14 PM
short and impressive.

everyadventure
07-23-2011, 01:59 PM
Such hope in this one!

TheodoreK.16
07-23-2011, 06:43 PM
Thanks guys, I appreciate it! (: