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Revolte
07-22-2011, 04:57 AM
Fingers scratch,
scraping smooth wet skin
on top creaking bed
lit by crackling fire.

Eye meets eye,
love's lust takes control
in forms of movements
-dancing rose peddles.

Tireless,
two bodies compete
one on the other
for which loves the most.

Explosive,
destination's found
(palace of future)
in racing heart's rest.

blazeofglory
07-22-2011, 05:15 AM
Fingers scratch,
scraping smooth wet skin
on top creaking bed
lit by crackling fire.

Eye meets eye,
love's lust takes control
in forms of movements
-dancing rose peddles.

Tireless,
two bodies compete
one on the other
for which loves the most.

Explosive,
destination's found
(palace of future)
in racing heart's rest.



Very profound and penetrarting! The beauty of the poem is boundless