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Twota
07-21-2011, 07:10 PM
I fly skyward,
reaching out to touch
the divine flesh,
I hear the angels'
soothing songs,
and rest my head
on those feather pillows,
while I watch white doves-
the guardians of heaven
hovering in ecstasy,
I smile at the scenery
and take a deep breath,
before I fall back
to where I belong,
on the fabric below,
to rebound again
for another view.

ShadowsCool
07-21-2011, 07:46 PM
Twota:

I really like this. Especially the ending. I saw a vision of someone floating.
Great Job!

Shadows

Twota
07-21-2011, 07:52 PM
Thanks Shadows ;D Glad you like it :D

Delta40
07-21-2011, 08:02 PM
I do like it Twota. Suggest you use a rousing perfume rather than arousing tho.

Twota
07-21-2011, 08:08 PM
Oh, yah, right ;D that's what I meant haha :D thanks Delta :D