A Piece Of Art

[Twota]

White papers,

coloring pens,

origamis

made of thoughts,

colorful

with metaphors,

neatly cut

by a meter,

admired

by the beholder.

[Delta40]

I love the simplicity of this Twota. sometimes the beautiful essence of a poem is drowned in too much detail but this shines brightly in my imagination. It is a pleasure watching you develop!

[Twota]

thanks alot Delta =D glad you like it and -It is a pleasure watching you develop- that's what i call ENCOURAGEMENT ;D

[tailor STATELY]

Admired by the beholder.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[yuka]

simple, but enjoyable

[hillwalker]

It's cryptic - with enough clues to paint a picture.

I might reconsider having 'coloring' and 'colorful' appear together in such a short piece (me being picky as usual) - and I'm not sure how a meter can cut a metaphor. But it's one of your better pieces for sure.

H

[Twota]

Lol tailor, thanks, glad you admire it :D

Yuka, thanks, glad you like it =DD

hill, haha picky ;D i 'll think of a replacement for colorful or coloring :D and -neatly cut by a meter- i mean the origamis not the metaphors, but glad you like it. Yay me! :D