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munkinhead
07-12-2011, 12:01 PM
The miracle of the loaves and fishes
is that each man passed the plate,
untouched,
to his neighbor.

So you might feed a great multitude,
yet they will starve.

yuka
07-12-2011, 12:27 PM
Sure.

everyadventure
07-12-2011, 12:59 PM
First stanza is definitely food for thought. The second one is unnecessary.

Delta40
07-12-2011, 05:27 PM
Food for thought? Last lines are a bit bumpy and could do with re-writing otherwise I like the ironic wisdom here.