The Stranger

[wavydavy123]

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[hillwalker]

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[wavydavy123]

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[hillwalker]

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[wavydavy123]

ok thanks for that and I actually agree. It's just I've never really been able to share my writing before and now that I've found this site I have somewhat rushed into putting pieces up. my first piece, which was considered quite good by the majority of comments, took me a long time with rigorous editing. my last two I have hardly even read back !
so I hope I will impress you in the future with a better piece

[hillwalker]

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[wavydavy123]

much appreciated