Mother

[Jerrybaldy]

Mother alone could create
the sweetest love
the lust of a vulva
the words of Shelley
pornography
a suicidal desire.
Only mother could have us believe
this crap, to ensure we conceive.

[Delta40]

What an Oedipal poem - packed with admiration and resentment in a few short lines. Freud would be impressed!

[Dr.reid_16]

I greatly agree with Delta on this one, loved it. I thought it was brilliant, well done!

[everyadventure]

It left me puzzled.

[Jerrybaldy]

Its not oedipal Delta. You have missed which 'Mother' this is.
Miss Adventure with the correct 'Mother' it may make more sense.
Thanks very much Dr.reid

[Delta40]

You just don't want to admit it....!

[IceM]

Mother seems to me like a nun, not sure if that's close.

It left me puzzled too, but I'll continue to read it until I figure it out.

[Jerrybaldy]

Let me think which Mother it could be that creates the illusion of romantic love, the lust of man to the otherwise unattractive vulva, the lust of a woman for an utter bastard, desire and love to a suicidal degree. All so that we should conceive. Which Mother could this possibly be? ............ Where is Hill when you need him :D

[Dr.reid_16]

It sort of reminded me of a part of a song by The Doors - The End.

The killer awoke before dawn, he put his boots on.
He took a face from an ancient gallery,
and he walked on down the hall.
He went into the room where his sister lived and,
then he paid a visit to his brother,
then he, he walked on down the hall.
he came to a door and looked inside-
"Father" "yes son" "i wanna kill you"
"Mother, I want to. . . .#%*@ youuuuu!!!"


A little bizarre but it was an Oedipal part, reading some comments and the poem again reminded me of this.

[Delta40]

Let me think which Mother it could be that creates the illusion of romantic love, the lust of man to the otherwise unattractive vulva, the lust of a woman for an utter bastard, desire and love to a suicidal degree. All so that we should conceive. Which Mother could this possibly be? ............ Where is Hill when you need him :D

That crazy energy drink Mother? :smilewinkgrin:

[Jerrybaldy]

Grrrrrrrrrrr :P

[Delta40]

Mother Nature?

[hillwalker]

Hill late to the party as usual (late-night barbecue)... and I'm with Delta's final guess. Mother Nature - and the primeval drive to go forth and multiply, with all the accompanying angst (and pleasure).

Great little poem btw...

H

[Jerrybaldy]

Woop woop.( Hope the bbq was fun, Hill)
Mother nature it is.

[hillwalker]

Woop woop.( Hope the bbq was fun, Hill)
Mother nature it is.

Head still a bit hazy - but aye. Mother Nature behaved herself as well - beautiful sunset and very few midges.

H