Written

[Revolte]

Moon shadows birth forgotten seeds
that grow to shapes of hearts and dreams
and cast a spell on shattered souls
both broken wings from years of toll
now form to one strong loving tree
as rainbow diamonds blink in please
then comes a rattle from the sands
a silence shouting for the hands
of two in love to make a dream
a new life born
loving
free.

[hillwalker]

This has some nice touches despite the occasional detour into the incomprehensible.

H

[Delta40]

I agree. I didn't follow it but I enjoyed its flow.

[free]

Beautiful poem. I like its every line. Particularly expressive is:

a silence shouting for the hands
of two in love to make a dream


Lovely!

[Revolte]

This has some nice touches despite the occasional detour into the incomprehensible.

H

Well you know me lol

[everyadventure]

It's one of those poems you can't help liking, although it's hard to say why. :D