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Steven Hunley
07-06-2011, 10:58 AM
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DocHeart
07-06-2011, 11:15 AM
Isn't it true? Anticipating the serving of a luxurious, creamy, rich desert is sometimes even better than eating it...

My regards, Steven :)

Steven Hunley
07-10-2011, 12:19 PM
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fizickse
07-10-2011, 12:52 PM
i definitely liked what you had going on there, it's hard for me to explain. i'm not the best critic there is, but i saw something good in the story. i think the genre is ambiguous, is it suspense, erotica, or something else? i didn't understand what was going on or why.