Dr.reid_16
07-04-2011, 11:32 AM
I have a new poem but I'm having a little trouble with the title. If someone can read it and suggest an appropriate title I would greatly appreciate it!
Death set the sun,
and souls stirred about in the wind.
The road ahead is dark and empty.
Carry on I must, for I need to leave this place.
My love has left,
my heart has cracked,
and now I have no purpose.
I began my journey,
and ventured into the abyss.
Down the road.
Trees wept with quiet sorrow,
the cool breeze perpetuates,
and runs through my body.
As I walk, and walk,
the moon gazes upon me with its deserted eyes.
Each step I take is an emotional stab in the heart.
I am alone,
and I shall remain alone.
Tears stream down my cheeks,
my mind began to race.
A park was in the distance,
“Finally,” I said, “Sanctuary.”
I sat on a bench and started to sob.
I was startled when someone sat beside me.
We talked for a while, then suddenly,
I grabbed death’s hand and walked into the forest,
leaving everything behind.
Death set the sun,
and souls stirred about in the wind.
The road ahead is dark and empty.
Carry on I must, for I need to leave this place.
My love has left,
my heart has cracked,
and now I have no purpose.
I began my journey,
and ventured into the abyss.
Down the road.
Trees wept with quiet sorrow,
the cool breeze perpetuates,
and runs through my body.
As I walk, and walk,
the moon gazes upon me with its deserted eyes.
Each step I take is an emotional stab in the heart.
I am alone,
and I shall remain alone.
Tears stream down my cheeks,
my mind began to race.
A park was in the distance,
“Finally,” I said, “Sanctuary.”
I sat on a bench and started to sob.
I was startled when someone sat beside me.
We talked for a while, then suddenly,
I grabbed death’s hand and walked into the forest,
leaving everything behind.