My story published in new Cerise press

[Bobo Vrba]

Glad to be here.

There is a new number of literary on line magazin Cerise press, and my short story named Completed story in it. All critics welcome :) :nopity:

http://www.cerisepress.com/03/07/completed-story#english

[fizickse]

i think you are a pretty talented writer

[Bobo Vrba]

Thanks :) A friend of mine translated it to english.

[fizickse]

Thanks :) A friend of mine translated it to english.

so you are croatian?

[Bobo Vrba]

Slovenian actualy, but I live in Croatia. No big difference. Small European countries :)

[cyberbob]

LOL wow, that was a great story.

I liked the part about the candle and the cup of water and the ending was funny. The whole thing was very absurd and funny.

The thing I don't get is why the beginning part is necessary. The part about him being a writer seems to have nothing to do with the rest of the story and I'm not sure that it adds anything to the story either.

Otherwise, it was impressive. The biography section at the bottom says that you've published other stories and two novels? Impressive. Can those be found online too?

[Bobo Vrba]

I am happy that you liked the story. Beginning, you're right, is not really necessary, but it shows how weird Van Der Graaf is. Strange person living in his own world. For the moment I don't have anything translated into English, but working on some translations, and I hope that by the end of the year will be a few more stories. Thank you very much for your comment cyberbob :)