The Hour Glass

[Twota]

I live like an ant
trapped in an hour glass,
i strive to survive
the forever falling grains,
for they will last
as long as time itself.

I know someday will come
when i can no longer
carry on,
but may be one day,
the constantly falling sand
will break my hour glass.

[Delta40]

what a way to encapsulate hope! Have you tried shaping the yellow font so it looks like an hour glass?

[Twota]

what a way to encapsulate hope! Have you tried shaping the yellow font so it looks like an hour glass?

LOL!! well , yah xD .. but neglecting the color , -what a way to encapsulate hope- you mean it's a good or bad way :D

[Delta40]

a good way. I mean you allude to limited hope but hope all the same...

[everyadventure]

Oh, the futility! But if there's a way for an ant to get in, there must be some way out...?

[Twota]

yay =D thanks Delta =]]] i was afraid it might be too short to convey my message, turned out to be fine though ;D

[Twota]

Oh, the futility! But if there's a way for an ant to get in, there must be some way out...?

hmm ea , you know i never thought about that o.o i guess it never entered , it was just there somehow , just like us in this world , no way out :D

[hillwalker]

i was afraid it might be too short to convey my message, turned out to be fine though ;D

Cryptic - there's a reason why they say less is often more. Good stuff.

H

[Twota]

Yay! ;D i 'll keep that in mind, thx hill x]

[ShadowsCool]

Cryptic and I like it

[kittypaws]

T ~ say all you can in a compact form...you did a very good job with this one.

I have been following your writes and you are improving.

Keep up the good work.
:smile5:

kittypaws

[Twota]

thanks Shadows =DD glad you like it x]

and kitty, thanks alot :D i 'll do my best to keep it up x]