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Jerrybaldy
07-01-2011, 07:06 PM
Let me sleep, my sleep
of dead daddy,
where he
is quite unaware,
he is dead.
Let me sleep, my sleep,
where I awake like a flapping fish,
unable to breathe this air.
Let me sleep like I said something clever,
I have no more clever, unsaid.
Amputate
our bodies,
wherever the love
has spread.

Delta40
07-01-2011, 07:09 PM
Powerful as usual and cast me into that place where I pray that I will never feel again.

MystyrMystyry
07-01-2011, 10:29 PM
Midnight panic attacks and cold sweats signalling the dark hour of the soul

When I wake up like that I have to brew coffee and turn on the spotlight to pretend it's daytime - and then desperately try to find something to do

PrinceMyshkin
07-02-2011, 07:44 AM
One of the best and most moving of yours, dear Jerry!

the facade
07-02-2011, 12:20 PM
This was very poignant. Wow.

AuntShecky
07-03-2011, 02:32 PM
This is very nice--reminds me of my all-time favorite piece of yours (so far): "I'm With You, Dad." ( I'd say more, and also read some of Delta's latest, but my two grandsons just arrived--my "old" pal and the newborn!) Catch you later, JerryB!

Jerrybaldy
07-03-2011, 06:31 PM
Thank you Peeps. I usually hate it all by now, but the last four lines which maybe should be only two, I still quite like.