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the facade
07-01-2011, 10:01 AM
Shipwrecked

I was out drowning
in rapid streets
when out of the tempest
a squatting child emerged.

He leaned on his haunches,
ground his teeth for the bite
and leapt like a leopard
from the cold cobble stone.

He landed with a splash
that pulsated the cobble
into ripples around his paws
and the torrent
of the liquid ground
washed my body
into shore.

everyadventure
07-01-2011, 10:22 AM
Intriguing and bizarre.

Delta40
07-01-2011, 05:56 PM
good imagery and it reminded me of being swamped by rush hour