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beautiful_heart
06-28-2011, 12:45 PM
Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved,
who made me realize the true meaning of love.

He is not with me, but his memories are still there...
Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved.

My eyes are searching him, as if I'll meet him again someday.
My heart still has a hope that he is still waiting for me somewhere.

Till the time he was in front of my eyes,
I was never be able to express my love...
But now I wish he could be there..

My days become desolate & nights shattered.
My mornings becomes sombre & evenings despair.

Everytime when I think about him, he is not with me,
but his memories are still there...

I wanna hug him once & kiss on his forehead.
I wanna take all his grieves & gift him all my happiness.
My shivering soul wanna whisper in his ears that he is the only one who is
loved by me for ever.

After painting life with beautiful colours,
he made me realize the true meaning of love.

I don't know where he is today,
but writing these verses in hope that he will read them & again feel the same
for me someday.

Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved...

tailor STATELY
06-29-2011, 05:40 AM
A sweet personal poem.

Welcome to Litnet.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

beautiful_heart
07-02-2011, 01:39 PM
Thanks Tailor STATELY for your comments. :-)

Delta40
07-02-2011, 07:47 PM
A heartfelt simple truth of what you know now that you perhaps did not before.

beautiful_heart
07-03-2011, 02:56 AM
v.true Delta40. If i was aware of this thing then perhaps i'm with him today. :-(

blazeofglory
07-03-2011, 03:10 AM
Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved,
who made me realize the true meaning of love.

He is not with me, but his memories are still there...
Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved.

My eyes are searching him, as if I'll meet him again someday.
My heart still has a hope that he is still waiting for me somewhere.

Till the time he was in front of my eyes,
I was never be able to express my love...
But now I wish he could be there..

My days become desolate & nights shattered.
My mornings becomes sombre & evenings despair.

Everytime when I think about him, he is not with me,
but his memories are still there...

I wanna hug him once & kiss on his forehead.
I wanna take all his grieves & gift him all my happiness.
My shivering soul wanna whisper in his ears that he is the only one who is
loved by me for ever.

After painting life with beautiful colours,
he made me realize the true meaning of love.

I don't know where he is today,
but writing these verses in hope that he will read them & again feel the same
for me someday.

Today I wanna dedicate something to my beloved...

I find this a very deep poem and there is total surrender. And the most beautiful part of the poem is there is immersion, submergence. That is how love happens, both the lover and the beloved will be integrally one and duality disappears. Reading this poem I woke up to the fact that love still exists in this world amidst sheets of chaos. Love is an oasis for the wayfarers who have lost their taverns.

beautiful_heart
07-03-2011, 10:13 AM
You are correct. True love still exists in the world and I also realised this after losing my heart to the person who was never mine. :-(

Jerrybaldy
07-03-2011, 06:41 PM
I hate the word beloved. It should have two sylables yet it forces us into three. As an old person your poem reminded me of how gullible we are. He never made you realise the true meaning of love but I understand that you think he did. Your poem told of innocence perfectly.

beautiful_heart
07-04-2011, 02:26 AM
I'm agree with you Jerrybaldy. Beloved should have two syllables but unfortunately has three. May be the third one is for pain that love bring with it. Anyway thanks for your comment.