The Kiss

[ShadowsCool]

My breath roused by her hair's radiance
My eyes blaze beautifully in her view
A spark frozen through in time
Touching on the everlasting
White fire.

I'm swept in her presence
No greater statue I know exist
As her that breaths wondrous life
On me as my heavenly wife.

Her greatness only a godly can make
These lips she feeds to me in duple moonlight
On the edge of wonderment
Her hands, lobes and mind
This whole woman.

Such I hold to her to meld one with her
Her great force arrives from higher spirits
I gaze in awe of her creation
A gift lent for an earthy heart
Magnified!

Her sumptuous scent radiates through the air
Her ravenous beauty all around her, a sumptuous kiss!
Verging into the everlasting, an angel
Eyes wide awake, mine
Soaking her in.

[Mojtaba-Iraqi]

that was a real innovation, especially the first three parts are the most captivating ones, but unfortunately, it seems that there is a decrease in inspiration while going through, if im not mistaken

[Haunted]

Very poetic, and the beautiful, singleminded sentiments brings John Donne to mind. But as a contemporary reader, I can't help but looking for an "edge" and feel a bit let down in the lack of one.