Dr.reid_16
06-21-2011, 06:32 AM
I just wrote a poem last night, thinking maybe it'll be a good way to express some feelings about recent occurrences in my home. I just want to know if anyone thinks this is good, and PLEASE give advice so I can better my self! (:
The Road of Woe
Darkness clouds the morn.
The fear of death,
and shadowy ends,
destroy bright ventures to knowledge.
Cuts and blood,
frowned upon.
Disorders are hidden,
misunderstood,
and swept away.
Pills of large amounts,
swallowed and absorbed.
Yet another trip,
another lonesome night,
they wait, and wait,
until the release,
after nearly seven days of pain,
and sorrow.
Child into adult,
in a matter of minutes,
not years.
There is no place to go,
only forward,
down the road of woe.
The Road of Woe
Darkness clouds the morn.
The fear of death,
and shadowy ends,
destroy bright ventures to knowledge.
Cuts and blood,
frowned upon.
Disorders are hidden,
misunderstood,
and swept away.
Pills of large amounts,
swallowed and absorbed.
Yet another trip,
another lonesome night,
they wait, and wait,
until the release,
after nearly seven days of pain,
and sorrow.
Child into adult,
in a matter of minutes,
not years.
There is no place to go,
only forward,
down the road of woe.