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ShadowsCool
06-17-2011, 07:24 AM
-Seeping sand-

Seeping Sand
Silent cloud.
Out there you lie in the spirit of the sky;
I am here, pondering my fate against the crash of the ocean
That stirs like your once beating heart.

Tonight you lie dormant amid the cosmic dust
Beyond the moon that illuminates
Brightly to the glimmering sand,
Where I lay my hand
To feel your silent heart.

~

Jack of Hearts
06-17-2011, 02:40 PM
It reads like a eulogy, ShadowsCool, given by someone on a beach at nighttime? Or a graveyard near the beach? Is this reader in the ballpark?






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ShadowsCool
06-17-2011, 03:17 PM
Jack of Hearts,

"It reads like a eulogy, ShadowsCool, given by someone on a beach at nighttime"

That is correct sir. That was what I was trying to say. Her memory lives in all these places we use to visit, but now she is dead like the sand.

Shadows