dogs

[David Strugnell]

i was tired sitting on logs
thinking of dogs
i went for a walk
and a talk
i thought the sun was better
than the letter
in the sun
showing a man eating a bun
the awful pain
was healed by the rain
and i got the hell into
sitting on logs
thinking of dogs

[Jack of Hearts]

Hmm.

Pourquoi est-ce que tu n'aimes pas le pain?







J

[hillwalker]

A perfect example of rhyme over reason - intentionally surreal. It's not going to change the shape of literature over-night but at least you are now barking up the right tree.

H

[Jerrybaldy]

truely awful. Good job.

[Jack of Hearts]

What sort of bun?






J

[MystyrMystyry]

Sticky buns!!!

[Jack of Hearts]

There's no evidence in the text to support that.







J

[yuka]

I also think it's sticky bun!

[Jack of Hearts]

Nevermind the bun. Why was the narrator thinking about dogs?


What are 'dogs'?








J

[kittypaws]

Hot dogs! I think it be sausages stuffed in a bun on a hot summer day.

Or it could be....????

well David at least you got us all thinking!:willy_nilly:

kitty

[Jack of Hearts]

And furthermore this reader contends that this poem is not even about dogs at all.







J