Lamentation

[Shahenda]

Standing in the midst of my shallow Mind
scattered thoughts is all i can find
walking through tangled paths
before my eyes my life passes

Grieving i stand still
Sinful is my past
sorrowful is how I'll last
Everything is just fading

Weeping for salvation
Lamenting for the life I've wasted
A treacherous everlasting mock it was to me
and an eternal autumn, let it be

[hillwalker]

I'm sensing the despair behind this piece, but some of the expressions you have chosen do not read particularly well - possibly because English is your second language (and also, in a couple of places you are struggling to maintain the rhyme).

scattered thoughts is [should be are] all I can find

walking through [along makes more sense] tangled paths

before my eyes my life passes - is archaic. No one speaks or writes like this nowadays.
my life passes before my eyes would be the standard way of saying this.

Sinful is my past - again terribly archaic. It sounds like an extract from an ancient text the way you have written it here.
My past is sinful makes more sense - although, of course, the rhyme is lost. But at least the sense is maintained which is more important.

but as for

A treacherous everlasting mock it was to me - this line has got me beaten. I've no idea what you are trying to say here.

H