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Jerrybaldy
06-11-2011, 08:02 PM
You others were entertainment.
I never professed to need you,
I laughed out loud
and massaged camomile
on your itchy allergic thoughts.
You hid your discharge
in sweetly scented pants.
Your poetry amused me
in its similarity
to the crap that I think too
is unbareable at half past two.
You others will not last,
you will not be there
when I am fading and I need another.
You are not my friends,
I will not see your winning smiles.
You others were entertainment.
But you,
yes, you,
you winner,
you shone through.

Maryd.
06-11-2011, 08:10 PM
You, yes you, write so much like another fellow I once knew. Very interesting one this one, Jerry...

Delta40
06-11-2011, 08:18 PM
A poet with no decorum replies:

everyone who loves you can check their panties and wonder if the sticky substance stretching betwixt thumb and finger is just the right texture to be the YOU in this post.

Jerrybaldy
06-11-2011, 08:34 PM
lovingly I am able to respond f uck off Delta you misguided twat xx

Delta40
06-11-2011, 08:35 PM
f ucking off now Jerry x

Jerrybaldy
06-11-2011, 08:39 PM
me too xx and happy to say life is better with you xx

everyadventure
06-11-2011, 11:21 PM
Wow Delta, I didn't think anybody could top one of JB's poems for "gross factor" but your comment outdid him!

And, dear Baldy, I offer congratulations to your winner. What, precisely, is the prize, hmmm?

Delta40
06-12-2011, 12:02 AM
Wow Delta, I didn't think anybody could top one of JB's poems for "gross factor" but your comment outdid him!

Like Jerry often says, 'It isn't very hard'

Jerrybaldy
06-12-2011, 06:21 PM
erectile dysfunction joke?? :D
I can see how this thread could be misread so I would like to say that I love Delta and her poetry.